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Misaki new design

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So yup~ I thought of changing her clothes to something less bratty. XD

I would love to hear your comment on this on which one you like better.
In my opinion,I like this version better.But she looks chubby XD

Info about Misaki:

Name: Misaki Michiko
Age: 17
Gender: Female
Height: 170 cm.
Weight: 130 lbs.
Element(s): Lightning and Fire
Village: Kumogakure(She was born in Konoha, though)
Rank: Chuunin (Almost Jounin)
Weapon: Katana
Favorite Food: Anything spicy and dangos.
Hobby: Training, meditating, pranking people...


More information (Personality, abilities, weaknesses...etc.):
Misaki is a really kind tomboy as well as helpful,cheerful and fun... She is not the smartest person though, since she has trouble concentrating in things. She is really good handling a katana and using Jutsus that affiliate with the element lighting. Her mayor ability is Speed though. When it comes to weaknesses it is Genjutsu. She cannot create genjutsu neither stop it easily. She has also difficulty fighting with ninjas that use Water-element techniques and using jutsus that require a big amount of chakra.
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:star::star::star::star: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star: Vision
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star: Impact

*First Critique*
Okay so, what I see right off the bat is her anatomy, there are a few "quirks" in the hip area, the legs, and with the positioning of the left arm. It seems like you may have "freehanded" the anatomy instead of sketching, or going by a base which isn't bad, but i would suggest flipping your canvas vertically if in a program, or holding your sketch in a mirror to make sure everything looks proportional when when flipped. Your errors can easily be fixed with a pose/anatomy tutorial, trust me, the simplest of things make the biggest difference. I also really like your use of color. The colors are complementary and cohesive, though I think this particular artwork may benefit from a greater use of highlighting and shading, so that your character shows some depth rather than a flat 2D look. But I can tell that you knew where you wanted your light source to come from which is a always good thing. Overall, you show a strong understanding of color, and like most of us, can benefit from a few tricks in anatomy.